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Source text in English

Sunday Mornin' Comin' Down

Well, I woke up Sunday morning
With no way to hold my head that didn't hurt.
And the beer I had for breakfast wasn't bad,
So I had one more for dessert.
Then I fumbled in my closet through my clothes
And found my cleanest dirty shirt.
Then I washed my face and combed my hair
And stumbled down the stairs to meet the day.

I'd smoked my mind the night before
With cigarettes and songs I'd been picking.
But I lit my first and watched a small kid
Playing with a can that he was kicking.
Then I walked across the street
And caught the Sunday smell of someone's frying chicken.
And Lord, it took me back to something that I'd lost
Somewhere, somehow along the way.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

In the park I saw a daddy
With a laughing little girl that he was swinging.
And I stopped beside a Sunday school
And listened to the songs they were singing.
Then I headed down the street,
And somewhere far away a lonely bell was ringing,
And it echoed through the canyon
Like the disappearing dreams of yesterday.

On a Sunday morning sidewalk,
I'm wishing, Lord, that I was stoned.
'Cause there's something in a Sunday
That makes a body feel alone.
And there's nothing short a' dying
That's half as lonesome as the sound
Of the sleeping city sidewalk
And Sunday morning coming down.

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Source text segment #5

Then I walked across the street
And caught the Sunday smell of someone's frying chicken.
And Lord, it took me back to something that I'd lost
Somewhere, somehow along the way.
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Flashback to a long-gone stable relationship, or childhood ...
Μετά πέρασα στην άλλη μεριά του δρόμου
και με πήρε η Κυριακάτικη μυρουδιά κοτόπουλου που κάποιος τηγάνιζε.
Και, Κύριε, μ' έκανε ν' αναπολήσω �
Pređoh preko ulice,
miris pečenja nečijeg osjetih tada.
O Bože, sjećanje na nešto što izgubih usput,
negdje, nekada
مشيت على طوال الشارع في يوم احد مميز برائحة المشواي المنبعثة من المداخن, يا الاهي, رائحة الشواى اعادتني الى ذكريات فقدتها منذ زمن بعيد, على �
fried chicken is a common sunday lunch in the USA, but not in France it would be roasted chicken and not fried: poulet rôti ...
country fried chicken, hashbrown casserole, eggs - a "family" style breakfast - lost to the singer as he's alone
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De ahí, cruzé la calle y agarré el olor de Domingo del pollo frito de alguien. Y oh Señor, el olor me llevó hacia algo que había perdido algún Lugar, de una forma u otra ordenadamente.

Translations of this segment (10 total; 10 unique)

それから通りを渡って 誰かが鶏を揚げてる、日曜の匂いを嗅いだ。 ああ神様、いつかどこかで失くしてしまった なにかのところへ引き戻された
それから道を渡り反対側を歩いた だれかのフライドチキンの匂いが日曜日の匂いだ。 ああ、いつの間にかどこかで なくしてしまった何かが蘇ってきた
通りを横切ると　ふと何処からか漂う 鶏を焼くにおい。日曜だな。 ああ神様、どこか遠くに忘れてきた 懐かしい何かを思い出す
それから通りを渡ると 鶏肉を揚げる日曜日の匂い ああ どこかでなぜだか失くした なにかのもとへ連れ戻されたよ
その後、通りを横切ると、日曜日のメニューのチキン空揚げの匂いがした。 ああ、神様、いつかどこかで失われた生活に また巡り合っているような気がする
通りを歩いて渡ってみると チキンを揚げてる匂いがしてきた ああ何だっただろう、どうやってだか いつかどこかで失ったもの
そして僕は道を渡った 誰かがチキンを焼いている匂い 神様、僕が無くした何かを思い出したんだ どこかでどうかして無くしちまった何か
どうにか通りを渡りすぎると 日曜日どこかで揚げてる鶏肉がにおってくる ああそうだ思い出したよこの匂い どこか遠くに置き忘れてきたアレだ
そして通りを横切ると 誰かがチキンを揚げている日曜らしい匂いがする ああ　それはどこかで失ったものを思い起こさせる どういうわけか道の途中で失ったものを
道を渡ると どこかで鶏肉を揚げるにおいがただよってきた するとこれまでにどこかで 失ってしまったものがよみがえってきたんだ
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