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Mini-contest 2012: "Yogi Berra Quotes" » English to Chinese

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Source text in English

There were 8 entries submitted in this pair during the submission phase.

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Submitted segment translations

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- "If the world were perfect, it wouldn't be."
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+26 | -9
To me (a speaker of US English), this sentence is equivalent to "If the world were perfect, it wouldn't be (perfect)." I can't see "be" meaning "exist" in this context.
+26 | -11
'be' can also mean 'exist'
+15 | -5
I agree with the sense of "exist": if the world were perfect, there wouldn't be a world (i.e., a perfect world is impossible).
+11 | -2
True, "be" could mean "exist", although I prefer the contradiction. Both are possible: it wouldn't exist/it wouldn't be perfect; the concept of perfection being highly subjective. SOMEONE would have something to gripe about.
+9 | -2
The world, as we know it, exists with its flaws.
+9 | -3
He is saying that imperfection is an essential part of life (as is the superfluous, according to Voltaire). Perhaps it is the imperfections which spur us on to better things, allow us to recognize and appreciate moments of perfection, etc.
+3
Guys, look at the context this sentence is written in! There are a series of paradoxes or illogical sentences. This is another one. "If the world were perfect, it wouldn't be (perfect)."
+4 | -1
So to you, the speaker of US English, Descartes' "I think, therefore I am" is unintelligible? Of course, "be" can mean "exist" in this context.
+1
"Be" reminds a phrase from the Bible: "Rachel is weeping for her children; She refuses to be comforted for her children, Because they are no more."
+1
I suppose that he meant that a perfect world would be dull, thus it wouldn't be perfect.

Translations of this segment (8 total; 8 unique)

這個世界不是完美的,如果是的話就不會有完美的世界了
如果世界真的完美,那就不完美了
如果世界是完美的它就不会是完美的
世界若真的成为了完美的世界,那么这个世界必定是带有不完美的
连完美的世界也不完美
如果世界是完美的,那就不是世界了。“(世界不是完美的
如果万物都完美了,那也就不能叫做完美了
没有缺点就是最大的缺点

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